Deleted SHIFT scene & HOURGLASS giveaway
Today on the SHIFT blog tour, I'm sharing an alternate first chapter of the book, written from Logan's "lyrical" point-of-view. I discuss the many reasons why I like the deleted scene, the many (more) reasons why it needed to be cut, and how I went about solving the problems it was originally created to solve, but in a much better way. Hopefully it's a fun little peek behind the scenes for you!Check out the blog He Followed Me Home to read it, plus enter to win copies of the book and some Keeley Brothers swag.
To compare, read the final version of Shift's first chapter here on the website.
Deadline: tomorrow at 9am Eastern. International entries welcome!
Lest you think the blog tour is taking me away from here, I've got news for you! I plan to spend the next week sharing photos and stories from my trip to Ireland, doing a day-by-day report of where I was two weeks prior. And I'll try not to shed so many wistful tears that I short out my keyboard.

Emerson can see "ripples," people who existed in that same location in the past. It's a timeslip novel, which is sort of like time travel, but instead of her going back to the past, the past comes to her. When she touches the ripples, they burst, which is really disconcerting.
Em meets a fantastic guy, Michael, who has a secret ability of his own, as well as a way to help her deal with the "rips," as they're called. The Hourglass, a small society set up to provide support and comfort to paranormal humans, needs Emerson's help to save a life and possibly the world.
That's all I can say without giving away spoilers. Hourglass comes out June 14, but you can win my extra ARC today!
Tell me in the comments: if you could make someone appear from any point in the past or future, who would it be? What would you ask them? What would you tell them about the present?
Deadline: Friday, April 29 (that's tomorrow! Because you need to read this NOW!), 11:59pm eastern. International entries welcome.
(EDITED TO ADD: And the winner is....bqdell! Thanks to everyone who entered and shared their heartfelt wishes. I admit I got choked up a few times. I promise if you check out HOURGLASS when it comes out next month, you won't be disappointed!)
Labels: Contests, craft, reading, SHIFT blog tour


52 Comments:
Thank you for the gtiveaway Jeri!! I want to read this SO bad :)
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Jena at 4/28/2011 11:45 AM
... On a happier note, thanks for the awesome giveaway!
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Unknown at 4/28/2011 11:45 AM
Thanks for the giveaway, this book looks SO good! :D
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Bella at 4/28/2011 11:50 AM
i've heard great things about HOURGLASS, so i'd love to win!
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Jennzah at 4/28/2011 11:50 AM
I'd also ask about my sister who my parents put up for adoption. They were too young at the time, and they didn't want an abortion. There's just so much my mum could tell me.
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Alex at 4/28/2011 11:50 AM
I think I'd like someone from the future to come back and tell me what it's like in 2150. I'd like to compare notes with them: do they have anything still like internet, cars, mobiles?
She can try out my mobile and see if hers has more options (if she has anything comparable).
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Judith H at 4/28/2011 11:51 AM
Thanks for the giveaway! I can't wait to read this book.
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Anonymous at 4/28/2011 11:57 AM
The time travel question is a really good one but hard. I guess I would like to meet my paternal grandfather. He died before I was born and my father always said he wished his dad could have seen me.
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Jill at 4/28/2011 11:58 AM
Would REALLY love to read this book!
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lindseybousfield at 4/28/2011 12:00 PM
I'd love to read HOURGLASS!
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Read Between the Lines at 4/28/2011 12:09 PM
thanks for the awesome giveaway.. :)
cant wait to read this book! :D
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LeviOsaaah at 4/28/2011 12:12 PM
I absolutely love the cover of this book! I have to admit its what caught my attention. Then reading what it was about just made me want to read it even more!
Thank you so much for the chance to win! meanmisskittie at gmail dot com
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Anonymous at 4/28/2011 12:13 PM
HOURGLASS
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Read Between the Lines at 4/28/2011 12:13 PM
Hey grandad just tell me everything you remember about the family???
because I want his memories to carry on to my children.
THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE CHANCE!!!
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ashley at 4/28/2011 12:18 PM
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bqdell at 4/28/2011 12:21 PM
What a waste of talent.
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M Cris at 4/28/2011 12:34 PM
I'd love to talk to my late father-in-law. He and I never met--he died rather tragically in a car accident when my husband was 20. I'd love for him to know his only son is doing well, is loved, and is the greatest father to our little girls...and that he misses going through all of life's milestones without a dad. Even if he won't say so out loud.
If, however, I were to choose a celebrity, I agree 100% with Terra Mae. Marilyn Monroe. I'd finally get to ask her: Was your death really a drug overdose or did someone else have something to do with it? (I'm a conspiracy theorist. LOL)
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donnas at 4/28/2011 12:49 PM
I would also like to have met my grandparents... any of them. LOL. Unfortunately they all passed before I was born, so...
But I WOULD REALLY like to meet Heath Ledger and ask him WHY and HOW exactly he died. >:( It's still not very clear...
I'm also curious about the future... I'd like to ask anyone from a couple of centuries ahead what is in it for us all. :-)
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Unknown at 4/28/2011 12:50 PM
If I were to pick somebody from the past, I'd pick someone from the past to bring back and talk to, it would be Agatha Christie or Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. (Though I don't know how long I'll last talking to pure genius!)
Thanks for the awesome giveaway!
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Anki at 4/28/2011 12:56 PM
Thanks for the chance to win this!
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Jeri at 4/28/2011 1:24 PM
I'm jnaomicline at gmail. Thanks for hosting the contest!
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Anonymous at 4/28/2011 2:42 PM
Thanks for the giveaway
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SandyG265 at 4/28/2011 2:43 PM
First, my birth father whose last contact with me was when I was a newborn; he died in 2008, just ten days before I hired a PI to find him for me. There are too many things I'd ask him to list here, but just looking into his eyes and getting a hug would probably be enough.
Second, I'd want to meet my future self, from the day before I die (last coherent day). I'd ask my future self if I should change anything about my life. Which presents a conundrum because if I changed something, then my future self would be different and how would I know if that was the right change to have made?
So maybe forget my second choice lol
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Kori at 4/28/2011 4:08 PM
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Alexis Salcido at 4/28/2011 4:29 PM
Wow, what a tough question. I think I'd like to speak to either my Nana's little sister (she died in Holland during WWII) or my Nana's cousin who worked in the Resistance movement during the war. I'd like to hear firsthand from them what it was like.
Beyond personal history, I think it would be awesome to talk to someone from Medieval Europe... like Heloise and Abelard. Maybe one of the Saints, like Francis of Assisi or someone.
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Myra McEntire at 4/28/2011 5:35 PM
Thanks for the giveaway!
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minhchieu at 4/28/2011 5:43 PM
Thanks for the giveaway!
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Pokadots1121 at 4/28/2011 6:53 PM
Thanks for the giveaway, I have been hearing lots of awesome things about this book
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Kristina at 4/28/2011 7:01 PM
& that is an crazy question! i think i would want someone from the roarin' 1920's to appear! Preferably a Flapper! How freakin' awesome would that be!? I would definitely ask them to teach me to Charleston & have them make my hair flapper-bob chic! Weird, i know. lol
I would tell them that the only good thing about the future is the YA novels! lol (it's true!)
i just think the 1920's was a different/easier/more exciting time!! :)
& yay another fictional BF for me in HOURGLASS perhaps? of course he could NOT replace Logan but maybe a close second? LOL
thanks for the giveaway Jeri!
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Brooke at 4/28/2011 7:26 PM
As always Jeri, you ROCK!
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Ria at 4/28/2011 8:32 PM
I would bring back my grandmother. I was very close to her but before she died, I didn't have a chance to say goodbye.
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Megan at 4/29/2011 1:34 PM
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I'm not sure why the blogging network isn't letting me post comments, i think the world just hates me right now. xP My comment is. "If I could talk to anyone in the history of the world I would want to meet L. K. Madigan because I heard that she was amazing. I woudl ask her how she managed to over come cancer and ask her all about her books. It's a shame that she's gone now, and I really wish I could have met her when she was still alive. :)
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Jeri at 4/29/2011 2:56 PM
(wow, i just realized how corney that sounded... but its true.)
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NikiRoche at 4/29/2011 2:57 PM
Great Question also Jeri :)
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Danielle at 4/29/2011 3:34 PM
I would like to say that I would let the past be the past. I don't think it's a good idea for me to contact people from the past.
But I really don't know what I would do...it's so very tempting...
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Mysteriousrose at 4/29/2011 4:32 PM
thanks for the giveaway! I can't wait to read HOURGLASS, and would *love* to win a copy!
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Anonymous at 4/29/2011 4:47 PM
Thanks so much for the giveaway Jeri! I have heard such great things about this book, it would be great to read it. (I also can't wait to read Shift too!)
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Alice Smith at 4/29/2011 10:00 PM
I would love to talk to some random (but nice) person from the future just to find out a bit about what happens.
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JessS at 4/30/2011 6:07 AM
Thanks to everyone who entered and shared their heartfelt wishes. I admit I got choked up a few times.
I promise if you check out HOURGLASS when it comes out next month, you won't be disappointed!
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Jeri at 4/30/2011 10:23 AM
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